Audience Responce- First Draft Edit

Audience Feedback- First draft edit

By gaining audience feedback for our first  draft edit, we are able to see what the audience like and dislike within the music video and make appropriate ammenments to the music video. We asked for a variety of audience opinions from both our peers and teachers. Here is a summary of feedback we recieved: 

• Excellent attention to framing and shot variety.
• Narrative lacks some coherency - no chronology - in and out of same shops? 
• Pregnancy seems a bit abrupt and rushed into the end of the narrative 
• Some jump cuts need smoothing.
• Some glances at camera need clearing.

For the next draft edit we produce, we plan to take these points into concideration to improve our music video. After doing this, we will upload a new draft edit and gain further audience feedback. We will do this until we are completely happy with the product.