Audience Feedback- Fifth Edit (Music Video)

Audience Feedback- Fifth Edit 

Again, as with all the previous edits, we carried out audience feedback to see how we could still improve. Here is a summary of what we found and we have taken this on board. Will make these amendments on the following edit. We didn't make some of the improvements mentioned last time as we thought that we knew better (obviously not) so now we plan to change these too.

• Still should cut to the performer on 'Stop stop go' for the first words.
• 1.26-31 this should cut away from 'maybe'.
• At 2.03, there is a jump cut which doesn't look quite right in context of the music video.
• 2.36 is out of synch.
• 3.37 you should cut away before cutting back to Nathan. The jump cut here should be avoided when round and round starts again so it looks more like a music video.