Audience Feedback- Third Edit (Magazine Advert)

Audience Feedback- Third Edit for the Magazine Advert

When compared the image used in the previous magazine advert, this one is much better as Nathan is definitely the focal point and the background is slightly blurred too, with nothing to distract the audience behind him. 


I prefer this image because the direct address is much clearer. As well as this, I have decided to keep the same text as the previous magazine advert as this contrasts nicely between the background and the colours aren't complicated either. My next step was to gather some audience feedback on whether the text looks better with just all black and all white at the bottom or how it is at the moment. 
Here is a summary of what I found:

• Much better at selling the artist, this links nicely to your music video.

• The font's work really well and stand out against the background.

• You should play with the image and manipulation of the photography, for example you could perfect the performer's skin using photoshop to add to the star image.

• You could include some logos on where the music is available from and also include a record label so it links to other products.

In the next few days I am going to edit the image further and act on the feedback given to improve my final product.