Audience Feedback- Third Draft Edit (Music Video)

Audience Feedback- Third Draft Edit (Music Video)

Since gathering audience feedback on my second draft edit, I have made ammendements in order to improve the music video further. 

This is a summary of what I found:

• The cinematic effects add something extra to the music video, which makes it fit even more into the indie genre. 
• The black cinematic bars are partiularly effective, again adding to the indie genre.
• The editing needs tightening up on, it needs to cut to the beat.
• The ending is a little disjointed, the clips need reordering.
• Some of the clips at the end aren't in black and white. 

I therefore plan to change these elements in the next draft edit to continue improving the product further.